[OOC: No, the strength is there. Everyone who takes but a second’s moment to consider the situation and those involved in it will see strength, plain and true, in both men. Those feelings are more a personal regret, rather than a character flaw.
Your writing is far from incorrect—if anything, it’s illuminating. It can provide even one who writes as one of the characters you’ve taken under wing with insight and potential for consideration. That above all is the mark of a talented writer. He opens the eyes of those who already know a great deal, and widens their perspectives further. This is how all writers grow.
Thank you for writing this piece, even if my thanks come from a secondary source as opposed to the direct purpose for your penning it. It still stands as a profound pinnacle in the choices that both men had to make, in the difficult situations they were thrust into. If anything, you have provided me with more growth in this moment than I often experience after years of RPing with a handful of others.
That is noteworthy, and worth, also, my gratitude.
Perhaps it is time I change my perspective further, and this, you are allowing me to do.]
[[I… honestly don’t know what to say. Thank you for such an… overwhelming reply. Uh, I’m glad you enjoyed my little flight of fancy and even more glad that I did not rubbish all over your main muse but it really doesn’t deserve half of what you say, it’s probably not even logistic within canon >.> I just… hold certain things in my mind for years until they finally emerge in one way or another :3 And this scene has been brewing away for about three years. Perhaps longer. Um. Your comments are always so giving and thoughtful. *alsdkfjaksdf*]]
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